Overall I am happy with my final piece, the feedback I have from others was that it worked well and it achieved what I wanted. If the sound of the toaster was more crisp like a click I might have tried to make more of a beat with it. I like how I kept with the more chronological order so the viewer sees the bread through to the burnt toast and not shots in a random order. Perhaps I might have put more fade ins and out to enhance the idea of forgetting.


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